This is a sort of Demo page for a comic strip presentation I am presenting for a syndicate.
I presented it like this so you can read it without me looking over your shoulder :)
I want honest feelings and reactions:
WHAT DOESN'T WORK?
WHAT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE?
WHY DO CERTAIN THINGS WORK (IN YOUR OPINION)?
Just so you know, each strip is separate (THIS IS NOT AN ONGOING STORY)
Each strip is a separate joke :)
There are three sections so make sure to check out each one and then text me some constructive feedback.
Thanks folks :)